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FOHS = Fountain of Holy Spirits (Fontaine aux Esprits Sacrés) : My project :)
My characters' folder : [link]

Page 5 of the 5 pages (the last one!) I've made during september 2011.
This is the beginning of my character Lysse's story.
This project was far too big for me, so I'm currently writting an illustrated book (only in french I'm sorry).
Info here : [link]
I thought it could be nice to post the 5 pages (well the 4 pages I never posted since the first is already online for a while) I've done before here to share this with you all.
I see mistakes here and there now but I still like those 5 pages ^^


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~ForestHowler Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so far very interesting! Keep up the good work!
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~SaraGardner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
This looks very interesting, and I'm curious to see where it goes, but are you open to minor grammar critiques/suggestions on any of these pages?
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:iconmaevachan:
Yes even if I'm not sure I will change something (because I'm so lazy XD), ah my bad english grammar ~ T_T
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~SaraGardner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Well actually on this particular one the grammar is perfect :) I might comment on the others if you would find it at all helpful though.
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Mostly! "It's not the moment to be sad" is correct grammatically, but "It's not the time to be sad" would be more natural.

Also, it should be "Come on!" not "Come one!"
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~SaraGardner Feb 28, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh, I didn't see that before. :)
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:iconariadnei:
AMAZING!!!!!
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Mood: Wow! ~suyuku-san Dec 11, 2012  Student Writer
Marco gives off "Backstabbing Jerk" vibes to me, I bet something will happen because of him... :X but that's just me keep up the amazing work it's cool to see your art turned into a comic :la:
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